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Melanie LeBlanc
U1L3A3
Descriptive

Pre-inscription stage:

topic:
Abandoned homes
form:
Informal
audience:
Adolescent to Adult
purpose:
To a descriptive in regard to dilapidated/abandoned house and how vulgar herd should take great care of their homes in the sight of it will become derelict or decrepit. rhetorical devices:
Personification : deserted loathsome houses
knowledge peeked out

Similes : a house is like ~y child
white paint and dust grass land on the surface walls like grovelling snow

Metaphors : roof resembled a wood floor

hook:
I’ve always fix something fascinating about seeing an crafty dilapidated house along the side of a tortuosity road, they spark my curiosity except most of all give me the shivers. affirmation:
How could be so neglectful towards their existing space... wondering what kind of extraordinary human being would allow that to chance. sight:
... steam rising up from the wicked tarred streets
smell:
...the smell of musky body odour lingering in the hot summer demeanor... sound:
The sound of babies enormous and kids shouting...

Rough draft:
NOTE: phrases highlighted are being modified to the phrases shown in crotchets. (I’ve always found something fascinating all over seeing an old dilapidated house in a line a winding road, they spark my marvel.) Something about the fascination of in ruins houses along winding roads sparks my rarity but most of all give me shivers. (I look intently; captivated by the sight) looking at the perception of the crippled abandoned house wondering the sort of kind of monstrous human being would capacitate that to happen. The sight of overgrown weeds, rotten window sills and newly established spider webs makes my backbone tingle. It makes me nauseous whereas walking along trails that back not upon to (that lead to deserted houses) detestable houses. Questioning myself, the thought of to what degree could be so neglectful towards their manner of life environment. A house is like an infant it must be pampered and cared...

Melanie LeBlanc

U1L3A3

Descriptive

Pre-publication stage:

topic: Abandoned homes

form: Informal

auditory: Adolescent to Adult

purpose: To a descriptive through dilapidated/abandoned house and how canaille should

take great care of their homes under the jurisdiction it will become derelict or decrepit.

rhetorical

devices:

Personification : deserted loathsome houses

taper peeked out

Similes : a house is like each child

white paint and dust al~ on the surface walls like draggle snow

Metaphors : roof resembled a forest floor

hook: I’ve always set up something fascinating about seeing an original dilapidated house along

the side of a serpentine road, they spark my curiosity moreover most of all give me the shivers.

text: How could be so neglectful towards their course of life space... wondering what kind

of hideous human being would allow that to chance.

sight: ... steam rising up from the villanous tarred streets

smell: ...the smell of musky material substance odour lingering in the hot summer manner...

sound: The sound of babies enormous and kids shouting...

Rough draft:

NOTE: phrases highlighted are actuality modified to the phrases shown in crotchets.

(I’ve always found something fascinating encircling seeing an old dilapidated house along a

winding road, they spark my phenomenon.) Something about the fascination of in ruins houses along

winding roads sparks my rarity but most of all give me shivers. (I gloat; captivated by the sight)

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